Only had a quick look (very nice by the way).
The introduction on the homepage reads a bit clumsily to me, it could do with either some punctuation or just restructuring a bit so it reads more clearly.
Maybe change it to :
hi and welcome to bennraistrick.co.uk
the home of media design and development
enter my world, where you will discover fresh and fantastic interactive media
please see for yourself
Only added 1 comma and separated the last line so it's more like whole sentences without changing the layout too much and changing it into "proper" sentences. |